Primary Genre: Fantasy
Word Count: 135,000
Description and Details:
Hello! I would like to know if the characters are compelling, your thoughts on the plot as well as the subplots and whether or not you enjoyed the read.
Document has gone through an initial edit for punctuation, spelling, and grammatical errors but please forgive me if I missed some.
Is Illiana a protagonist you enjoy reading? Is she a hero in your eyes and is the group she travels with believable and cohesive group by the end?
TW: contains allusions to possible physical and sexual abuse, deaths, and transgender issues.
Does contain a sex scene but it is not lewd.
Enjoy!
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