Primary Genre: Romance
Word Count: 69,930
Description and Details:
1. Does the first page make you want to turn the page and keep reading?. Better yet, do the first few sentences make you care about what comes next?
2. Does my book hit a lull for you at any point, and were you tempted to skip paragraphs or even pages, because your attention was wandering so much?
3. Did you skip over content or skim over it (at least in parts) to speed up the reading, so you could “get it over with”? Was it because of the book itself — too much detail, irritating dialogue, etc. — or because you weren’t in the right headspace for reading it?
4.Did you think anything was missing?
5.Did the writing help or hinder your engagement with the story?
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