zendari

Primary Genre: Science fiction

Word Count: 60,000

Description and Details:

This is a story about a planet run by the women that abduct men from earth. The men think that this is the best place ever, but they have no idea what these women are capable of.
1. I would feedback on the storyline.
2. I would like feedback on the characters.
3. I would like feedback on the scenery

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