Forever in Your Debt - Romance story - Chap 1 - 5

Primary Genre: Romance

Word Count: 5,500

Description and Details:

What do you think of the Intro? Is there enough detail? Is there enough emotion?
During the Meet Cute, is there enough conflict?
In the story so far, is there conflict between characters?
Are the motivations of each character clear?
Are their goals stated and reasonable?
Is there anything about the story you didn't like?
Would you like to continue reading the story?

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