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Simply put, Crow is the villain's story. when I set out writing this, about four years ago. I hardly imagined how quickly and deeply I fell in love with this novel. This is why in part, that I knew it would be good to get another set of eyes on...
Simply put, Crow is the villain's story. when I set out writing this, about four years ago. I hardly imagined how quickly and deeply I fell in love with this novel. This is why in part, that I knew it would be good to get another set of eyes on this, besides my own. Crow is a science fiction with a dash of fantasy. it takes place on the world of Crowdidia- a planet that holds two different races - the Crowdidyians and the Dragtonians. who are at odds with each other. The novel centers around Jocren, who is a half-Dragtonian and half Crowdidyian male, who was sent on a mission by Dr.Rotter to free Crow. Jocren reluctantly complies, knowing that if he wants to see his sister alive again, he will do as Dr. Rotter demands. Jocren is joined by six others(not counting the scientists), whose sole job is to ensure that Jocren completes his task of freeing Crow.
Crow is the first of two novels. it has been edited numerous times and I'm looking for a fresh pair of eyes to look over it, before I begin the process of getting it published.
Sincerly,
Richard M Polk
Follow me on my five year journey to becoming a Ranger. Rangers are some of the most highly trained, intelligent, and deadly fighters in the US Army; and Ranger School is where they are made. The US Army Ranger School runs for 62 days and currently has three phases: Benning/Darby;...
Follow me on my five year journey to becoming a Ranger. Rangers are some of the most highly trained, intelligent, and deadly fighters in the US Army; and Ranger School is where they are made. The US Army Ranger School runs for 62 days and currently has three phases: Benning/Darby; the Mountains; and the Florida/Swamp phase. And it is one of the toughest schools in the world. Rangers go for weeks with little sleep or food and undergo grueling training under the harsh tutelage of the Ranger Instructors (RIs). Few even try this course, while still fewer actually graduate. This memoir will take the reader through my arduous five year journey to becoming a Ranger. Beginning with me joining the Army in 1990, through my basic and advanced infantry training, to my time as an infantryman with the 101st Airborne, the 506th Infantry in Korea, and the 10th Mountain Division, you will learn about not just my experiences but also get an inside look at the prevailing culture and training of the US Army circa the early 1990s. More importantly, through the story of my transition from civilian to a lean mean fighting machine, and ultimately to leader of men, you will gain valuable insight into what it takes to become a leader. Join me in reliving the highs and lows of my journey to the Black and Gold culminating with my ultimate triumph!
I hope that this story of self-discovery will entertain and inspire anyone who wants to lead their best life, whether in the military or civilian world.
ADVISORY: Language, funny subject matter, and a complete disregard for political correctness. If you are easily offended, keep on scrolling!
LOOKING FOR: insight into how well the book flows. There are some explanations that are necessary for context within the story. However, I am interest in feedback as to how well (or poorly) this helps the reader understand the story better.
Thank you for your help and God Bless you all and most of all God Bless the USA!
This is the first 30 or so pages from my book The Blood and the Infinite. I am still in rough draft mode but I would love some feedback on pacing, imagery, grammar, and dialog.
advice and guidance
Hey guys! I am looking for all sorts of feedback on how interesting it is, how can I make the story clearer, and grammar, punctuation, and more. Please submit feedback for whatever reason you see fit! When reading, please keep in mind that there is a murder scene in this...
Hey guys! I am looking for all sorts of feedback on how interesting it is, how can I make the story clearer, and grammar, punctuation, and more. Please submit feedback for whatever reason you see fit! When reading, please keep in mind that there is a murder scene in this chapter. Reader's discretion is advised.
With most of the book I would like to know if the characters were well developed and likable. And if there is anything that I could explore further, what parts were boring, and what are the books strengths and weaknesses.
In Chapters 5, 8, and 14, I have a sub...
With most of the book I would like to know if the characters were well developed and likable. And if there is anything that I could explore further, what parts were boring, and what are the books strengths and weaknesses.
In Chapters 5, 8, and 14, I have a sub plot where Henry, Juda, and two knights go out looking for Dawn. I want to know how I could develop them more.
I am open to any other suggestions as well!
They say stories don't die unless everyone forgets; I say some of them run and scrape and bite, never to be forgotten.
I want feedback about the overall feel of the story.
Anything that can help me improve and suggestions please leave them down as well as how to use better vocabulary.
This novel is a light rom-com. I would appreciate any feedback, especially if you notice anything culturally or socially offensive or inauthentic. Thanks, I hope you enjoy it.