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Get Beta Readers for Your WorkThis is an ongoing story and I want feedback on how it comes off to readers so far. I'd like to see if it catches your attention, where if it does, and anyway I can improve it. This is a passion project of mine, so I want to make it...
This is an ongoing story and I want feedback on how it comes off to readers so far. I'd like to see if it catches your attention, where if it does, and anyway I can improve it. This is a passion project of mine, so I want to make it the best possible.
Thank you and happy reading!
Hello,
Phoenix King is a dark fantasy, and anime/Arthurian themed story.
This is the sequel to Curse of the Shadow King.
If you'd like a free eBook copy of book one, DM me (IG) Author_Joseph_Harkreader
If you enjoy well written/lovable characters, and tons of mythology and magic ~ this is...
Hello,
Phoenix King is a dark fantasy, and anime/Arthurian themed story.
This is the sequel to Curse of the Shadow King.
If you'd like a free eBook copy of book one, DM me (IG) Author_Joseph_Harkreader
If you enjoy well written/lovable characters, and tons of mythology and magic ~ this is for you!
I'm looking for feedback on pacing, dialogue and the flow of action/magic.
What do you like?
What don't you like?
Is there anything confusing?
Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out...
Hi, I'm trying to write a dystopian kind of novel. I'm currently feeling jumbled and unsure. I really like how the book is in the end but I've been struggling with writing the start, I only have a few chapters in right now and just wanted to throw it out there for anyone to read. Please give me some amazing suggestions and routes. I really am struggling with getting this in the same tone as the beginning chapters (1.2) and making it grow. Also I know my grammar is bad, just in the very beginning stages.
Im having issues with maybe introducing characters, and also feel its to short. I have planned out the middle to end and like the direction but will keep it updated as i go.
Murphy is an astronaut who spent billions of years in isolation after all people on Earth died to a plague. They recollect their identity by retelling their stories with Hal and with the people they loved.
introduction to two of the secondary characters of the book. Levi and Rafiwa in a train accident that turn out to be a twist in fate.
The first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects...
The first eight chapter of the book.
It follows the main protagonist Anok, in her journey to recruit clansmen, whom she previously scouted as potential candidates, in their endevours to uncover the truth of the world they live in which has been insued in war, division and poverty. each aspects that the main five characters have personally suffered from and want to escape thus attaining freedom.
I want a quick review of whether the story is compelling to readers and will make for an interesting read.
I would love any type of criticism, praise, notes, critiques, etc. I would love to know which characters you like, which lines you like, and which you don't, and which your not sure of. Tell me if you think I should cut a part out, etc.
Chained by History and DNA
In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However;...
Chained by History and DNA
In a sci-fi fantasy planet called Ns, the Myloseans, the ruling race, subjugate the slave class, the Adhirans. A princess, named Nadine, wishes to be queen because she believes that is what she is destined to do as part of her family, the Cyrils. However; she is not that bright and hasn't unlocked her powers yet, which most people would have unlocked by her age. Shunned by her family, she wishes to join the military to unlock her powers.
Meanwhile an organization called to Elakiar hopes to exterminate the Myloseans in order for the Adhirans to be free. And other characters with hidden motives stand in her way. Will the chains tighten around Nadine? Will she break free? Or maybe something else entirely?
Contains:
Violence
Gore
Rape
Sexual Assault
Implied Sex
While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible....
While being pursued by a group of vigilantes, Ikai runs into a shimmering light that takes him 300 years into the past. As he navigates the fantastic, ancient world of history that he only ever read about in books, Ikai discovers things about himself that he didn't know was possible.
Usehjiki of the past and Usehjiki of the future have their lines crossed, with Ikai at the intersection. With the help of new, found allies, Ikai will race against prophecies to untangle the mysteries of Usehjiki and reveal the bits of its history that have been lost to the hands of time.
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I won't mind any type of comments that you can offer about plot, characterization and world-building.